Crafting Perfect 20-Mark Paragraphs
Every paragraph should start with a clear judgement that links directly to the question. For example: "Although improved living standards weren't the most crucial factor, they contributed substantially to Conservative dominance..." This immediately shows the examiner your analytical thinking.
Follow your judgement with detailed explanation using sophisticated historical language. Words like "galvanised," "exacerbated," or "instilled" demonstrate your understanding of cause and effect. Then support this with specific evidence - real statistics, dates, and examples that prove your point.
The magic happens when you repeat this explanation-evidence pattern twice within each paragraph. This creates depth and shows you can sustain an argument with multiple supporting points.
Remember: Always end each paragraph by linking back to the question with an interim judgement. This keeps your argument focused and shows you're constantly evaluating the factors' relative importance.