The Killing and Its Immediate Aftermath
You've probably seen war films, but "Remains" shows you the brutal reality that soldiers actually face. The poem opens in media res (right in the middle of action) with a soldier recounting how his patrol was sent to stop bank looters during the Iraq conflict.
The speaker's colloquial tone ("legs it up the road") makes the story feel conversational, but this casual language creates a disturbing contrast with the violence that follows. When the soldier says the looter was "probably armed, possibly not," you can hear his guilt and uncertainty - he's not even sure if the killing was justified.
The dehumanising language used to describe moving the dead body ("tosses his guts back" and "carted off in the back of a lorry") shows how war strips away humanity. The soldiers treat the corpse like an object, which reveals how desensitised they've become to violence and death.
Remember: The poem's structure mirrors the soldier's mental state - the lack of regular rhythm reflects his loss of control over traumatic memories.