Form and Structure
Owen uses a broken sonnet structure - the poem has 28 lines exactlydoubleatraditional14−linesonnet, but deliberately avoids the neat resolution that sonnets typically provide. This formal disruption mirrors how war disrupts and destroys traditional certainties.
The irregular metre and disrupted iambic pentameter creates an unsettling rhythm that never lets you get comfortable. Just as soldiers could never relax or feel secure, readers can't settle into predictable poetic patterns.
The four unequal stanzas 8−6−2−12lines create structural imbalance that reflects the chaos Owen describes. The tiny two-line third stanza acts like a bridge between past trauma and present haunting, emphasising the poem's psychological journey.
Owen's innovative sound techniques include heavy alliteration, onomatopoeia, and consonance that make you physically experience the poem through harsh, grinding sounds. Words like "guttering," "gargling," and "trudge" force your mouth to work harder, mimicking the soldiers' struggle.
Technical Achievement: Owen's combination of traditional poetic forms with innovative sound techniques created a new style of war poetry that influenced generations of writers dealing with trauma and conflict.