Exam Performance Overview
You've smashed this exam with an A grade* (64/75 marks)! Your strongest performance was in The Great Gatsby comparison, whilst unseen poetry needs some attention.
The feedback reveals that integrated comparisons and knowledge of poetic forms were your biggest strengths. However, your thesis statements need more clarity and direct links to the question - this is what separates good responses from outstanding ones.
Time management also held you back, particularly affecting the length of your responses. The teacher's suggestions for improvement include using more sophisticated vocabulary and ensuring every paragraph connects clearly to the question.
Top Tip: Start each paragraph with a specific comparative phrase like "Similarly", "In contrast", or "Analogously" to create seamless connections between texts.











