Page 2: Continuation of Question 2 and Introduction to Question 3
This page continues the analysis for Question 2 and introduces the model answer for Question 3 of the AQA English Language Paper 2 November 2020 exam.
The Question 2 response further explores the differences between Simon and Marius, focusing on their communication styles and time management approaches. The answer highlights how Simon's no-nonsense attitude contrasts with Marius's more relaxed and hospitable demeanor.
Example: The text notes that Simon uses phrases like "right, let's do it again" and "nothing to wait for, come on," indicating a focus on efficiency, while Marius speaks "calmly" and allows Gertrude to "sleep for half an hour" at the summit.
The examiner report for Question 2 emphasizes the importance of making perceptive comparisons and using appropriate signposting to link back to the question.
Highlight: The student has signposted to the examiner by using phrases such as 'conversely' and 'difference' in order to link back to the question.
Question 3 focuses on language analysis, asking students to examine how the writer describes his feelings in Source A. The model answer demonstrates a sophisticated analysis of language techniques, including metaphors and alliteration.
Example: The metaphor "a wave of nausea and pain swept over me" is analyzed to show how it conveys the all-encompassing nature of the writer's pain.
The response explores the connotations and effects of specific word choices, demonstrating a deep understanding of how language is used to create impact and engage the reader.
Vocabulary: Alliteration - the repetition of the same sound at the beginning of a series of words in succession.
The analysis of alliteration in "three faint tugs trembled the taut rope" shows how the technique is used to reflect the writer's emotional state and create tension in the text.
This detailed approach to language analysis is crucial for achieving high marks in GCSE English Language Paper 2, particularly for students aiming for a Grade 9 performance.